Carleigh's Reviews

[pencil]

Nice fluid lines

I liked it. The timing was good and it was quite amusing. I maybe would have liked it better if the guy was more "sketchy" looking, so he would fit in more with the pencil. Also, play buttons are nice because I always have a tendency to look at a page in another tab while I wait for something to load, and I don't like to find my movie halfway done. BUt otherwise, it was very nice, and you have a knack for this thing. Just practice your figure drawing and keep up the work!

Khris responds:

thanks for the possitive feedback dude, i might make a sequil with the things you just said

[happy st.P day]

Sort of an E-card feel

No plot, just a leperchan that looks like it is being hung and is thrashing its limbs around. The graphics aren't good. Here's a hint though: while those graphics aren't going to be praised in any context, it helps if there is a story or joke to the movie. Then the graphics may be passable.

[Under the Mistletoe]

great song

i really liked that flash, but I really like the song! your friend has a beautiful voice.

[Destruction Ball]

This is not bad

So the physics are weird, didn't bug me. The graphics I like. A lot. They are simple but effective, you know? I thinks thats the best part of this game. Try to keep that quality of graphics in everything else.

[Cursor Maze 3 demo]

Utilitarian game

It's okay, very short. I always wish that people would try to add a theme to these type of things, like a jungle maze, or a North Pole maze, or ANYTHING! And enough with the dot! Why can't we make the cursor a bunny or vampire or something?

[maze mania]

A nice try (sort of)

I want to say that this is a good effort, but I don't really think it is. First of all, the mazes are very sloppily done. Anybody, I mean anybody, is capable of making their game look neat. Maybe you think you aren't a good artist, but ANYONE can make straight lines in some graphic program. You didn't need to scribble out a maze as fast as possible.

Also, here is a hint on graphics:
Try to make your colors coordinate with each other. Bright green, blue, and red will make any game look like it was scribbled in Paint, especially when it is against a muted backround. Why don't you try making your next game with more similar colors, in shade, hue, and intensity? It will look much nicer.

I know that making a game is hard, but don't let your graphics get sloppy because you are concentrating on the inner workings. They are the first thing players see!

[Two Steps Forward]

I LOVE IT!!!!

That is great!! I'm definatly using that in something. I think people should make more cartoony songs like this because they are good for, well, cartoons!